HughesNet is a satellite Internet provider. They advertise that they "help you stay connected." Are they connecting you with your friends, your family, your bank, or your work? There is an object to which we are being connected that is missing from the sentence.
I recommend: HughesNet helps you connect with your world, your way.
If that is too wordy, then: HughesNet - When you can't be tied down by cable.
Ah, if only someone would hire me to write these witty bits of advertising.
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