It appears that the person who created the new Delta advertising campaign created the Land Rover campaign. When you only have two sentences in your commercial, your tag-line should be grammatically correct. This is the third commercial I have viewed this morning, Tuesday, September 17th, where the grammar has caught my attention. The entire message of the commercial is "Land Rover. Above and Beyond." (The other commercials with poor grammar were for the Bagster and Green Giant.)
Two prepositions and a conjunction do not make a sentence.
One person's commentary on how sloppy people have become with the spoken and written word. It all started with one commercial having glaringly bad grammar. I thought I would run out of material if I posted weekly. I was wrong. There are advertisers that need to go to grammar school.
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Thursday, September 19, 2013
Wednesday, March 13, 2013
Some sentences take more effort to end properly
"Some of the best places in the world take a little effort to get to." Don Wildman of Mysteries at the Museum while promoting Land Rover. This is a very easy conversational mistake that people tend to make. Once again, what does it take to get editors to proof check the spoken word?
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